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Post by ElvenChibi on Aug 3, 2007 15:19:55 GMT
I used rendering this time to shade it! I hope you like it! I'll make a BG for it later perhaps!
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Post by Xero Necross on Aug 3, 2007 15:36:19 GMT
this... is... so... AMAZING!!! your getting better and better by the drawing!... i'd say this is your hottest picture yet
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Post by ElvenChibi on Aug 3, 2007 18:18:39 GMT
Well thank you! ;D
Oh yeah, I forgot to mentionhow I made this one: I took a photo of myself in this pose and then copied it on the paper with my pencils. So technically, it's me standing there, just with a different face. ;D
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Post by Xero Necross on Aug 3, 2007 19:00:05 GMT
still awsome!
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Post by Fitzy on Aug 3, 2007 22:53:04 GMT
nice work elven.. youve done a good job with the rendering wel done.. shading is a touch off in some areas, and in others the shading loks like youve either missed some things or the light has changed angles for that area like the face, the light looks like its coming from the front of the right side of the picture, but the neck looks like the light has come from the right side, but from behind (because you havent shaded where the hair would leave a shaddow on the neck) the light on most of the picture looks like its coming from the right side, but her right hand (page left) makes it look like some is coming from below the strap on her left shoulder (page right) isnt casting a shaddow on her skin and there are some places where the vale could have cast a slight shaddow, but you havent done that, but thats ok ... the last thing i want to point out is that in some areas the rendering looks a little to hard/harsh like on the face, and on her left shoulder, youve given it a bit of softness but then you havent braught the gradient down to the skin base colour, it kinda looks like it just drops off quickly but keep in mind this is all just to help you... you really need to focus when shading, as to where some objects would drop shaddows, it can be really hard, but youve done a good job i love what youve done so far on your 1st full attempt on photoshop, and i know u will get alot better
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Post by shortsoldier on Aug 4, 2007 1:44:19 GMT
Wow great work with the rendering Elven the whole picture just looks awesome ;D
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Post by Life Essence on Aug 4, 2007 3:44:34 GMT
Well done, I would say more but I feel like I'm about to die (i.e I'm sick, stupid class with their stupid sicknessess)
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Post by ElvenChibi on Aug 4, 2007 12:32:12 GMT
Thanks everybody, and thanks for the tips and such, Fitz... I was kinda in a hurry with thw shading, but I still hav th photoshop data, so I can always make it look a bit finer.
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Aug 6, 2007 6:21:35 GMT
wow its great, butr isince i do n think u can work with that, heres a bit of criticz, the rendering still looks a bit like cell shading, its better, no doubt! but it stil looks like cell shading. as for the picture itself: HOT!! REALY HOT! she reminds me of my dance partner... but here again, some critts\;
you drew her cape in the wind, but her hair is going the opposite way! hmmm what more.. oh yhes, the band on her skirt, it looks like when you move it would fal of, unless theres an iron frame in her dress/skirt thingy, you should place it higher
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Post by Fitzy on Aug 6, 2007 6:35:39 GMT
the belt looks ok to me.. and i think is just that stylt... (unafected by wind)
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Aug 8, 2007 15:07:16 GMT
well, its not a big bug.. just a little onne ;D anyways, is that maeya?
edit: WHOAH i just disovered something imensly creepy! look at her neck!
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Post by Xero Necross on Aug 8, 2007 15:10:57 GMT
what about it?
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Aug 8, 2007 15:16:39 GMT
IT LOOKS LIKE SHES BENDING HERE NECK 90 DEGREES LOOK!
look right under her visible ear!
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Post by Xero Necross on Aug 8, 2007 19:30:48 GMT
lol i didn't see that before...
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Aug 9, 2007 9:27:00 GMT
thats just creepy! elven you gotta change it, its not healthy i think!
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