Hakastu
Junkie
I have two hands
Posts: 55
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Post by Hakastu on Mar 9, 2008 2:07:53 GMT
There he is. He is a ninja chibi. Crits welcome.
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Post by Xero Necross on Mar 9, 2008 2:24:37 GMT
sweet thats awsome
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Hakastu
Junkie
I have two hands
Posts: 55
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Post by Hakastu on Mar 9, 2008 2:28:17 GMT
Thanks
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Mar 9, 2008 9:15:15 GMT
yeah cool, though not really chibi ish imo
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Post by ElvenChibi on Mar 9, 2008 15:00:27 GMT
yeah cool, though not really chibi ish imo It's very much chibi ish. The head fits in the body about 2 times, so it's good there! There are chibis that are little larger. Ok, some crits: the foot that's pointed at us look a little weird now. You could try to make the front of the foot go wider (in other words, use foreshortening). I think the hair looks really good ^^ I see you're definitely improving there! If I look at his ankles, I wouldn't say his legs are very thick, so I'd say the bandages around his leg shouldn't be quite as wide as his pants are. Make those bandages follow the shape of his actual leg. For the rest it's looking fun! Keep up the good work! ^^
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Post by tomatochip on Jun 7, 2008 6:06:42 GMT
Pretty good just the hair sticking up on his head coould have been without. ;D
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Post by Xero Necross on Jun 7, 2008 11:23:22 GMT
that makes it look more natural i believe
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Post by danosix on Jun 7, 2008 13:58:30 GMT
It looks good. Crits: - Space the eyes out, leave the gap of an eye between them.
- The feet need to be slightly larger to support the body. A good way around it is whacking some big boots on him.
- As Elvenchibi said, the bandage on the leg needs to pull the clothing inward.
- I am just nickpicking now. The right pocket (his left) s smaller than the left (his right) one. It should be the other way round. (The trouser pockets not the jacket pockets.)
Tip: Now that you have it at this stage you can begin to add more detail to the image. Try to see where the lines become very straight and look at how you can add fold to give it a more striking silhouette. Hope this helps and keep it up. ^^
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Post by Xero Necross on Jun 7, 2008 17:36:54 GMT
lol you know the new guy brought this out of the dead pile this is from march usually isn't there someone who gets picky about something like this? oh yes thats right hunter hes not here no more we so lucky
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Post by Fitzy on Jun 7, 2008 21:23:37 GMT
awww poor hunter XD heel be back you know, and youl eat your words.. or he will, righ b4 he eats you
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Post by Xero Necross on Jun 7, 2008 22:08:57 GMT
i never liked hunter and he never liked me... we know eachother from another forum where hes a moderator... the jerk got "noob" over my avatar for jsut a little grammer issues... which weren't that bad... his was WAY worse... even then i dont fear hunter if anything he should fear me... also no one makes me eat my words... fore why would i? theres no reason to he knows i never really liked him all that much... even then hes never coming back i bet he forgot about this place... hes been gone for months
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