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Post by danosix on Nov 2, 2007 12:20:26 GMT
A little late, I know, but a couple of months wait doesn't hurt anyone. You may be disappointed but meh. Rather that uploading everything on my sketch pads and flood you with huge amounts of uncompleted crap I am just picking a couple of recent pictures I did. I will criticise every piece I upload but that just helps me to get it right the next time. You don't need to tell me anything about what is wrong with each image because the chances are I already laughed at myself about it. Arms are too long. Can't draw hands to save my life. Ran out of things to add to her and gave up. Shoes...tried to edit those in to avoid drawing the feet... Who can forget the sketch that you got half way through and noticed a big problem. Yes, her neck is the size of a giraffe. So I gave up on this when I noticed that, shame. Yes, they are all female but let's face it, you can do so much more with a female. You can put a lot more emotion with them in and they simply look good in any pose. Men suck tbh. EDIT: The white marks on some of the images is where I have covered up random doodles.
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Post by Fitzy on Nov 2, 2007 22:46:27 GMT
fitzt picture is neat, i like it, although the arm holding the bow could have been posed better.. plus looking at it both arms are too long but uve already noticed that XD,, also the breast that is sticking out, is making waaay to pointy an impression in the shirt, nice work with the head and legs u just gotta work on your torso and arms there..
second picture the arm looks somewhat disconected, and if it was connecting there it looks like the elbow joint would be on the floor making it a really long arrm, the angle of the wrist and forearm needs to be less steep.. i wouldnt say it was the hand itself that was ur problem there.. you might need to work on the face aswell, the eyes are too far apart, and the chin too round
third picture nice pose, very dynamic, good use of fore shortening, but the feet are to short, and the arm further away from us needs to be lowered just a fraction.. add a cape
4th picture is beautiful.. only crit the feet but youve done that, its just a matter of looking at shoes and feet to get the right shapes.. nice anatomy other than that, and cute pose looking innocent even tho she has a huge sword behind her
fith picture, her right arm (page left) the upper arm is a little long but only a little, and the head is slightly on the small side so its not just the fact that the neck is long, if the head was larger it might look more normal.. but only slightly larger
nice work there to, your doing really good, and you can only improve from here on, i hope all this helps
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Post by Life Essence on Nov 3, 2007 5:10:47 GMT
YAY. PEOPLE ARE COMING ONLINE these are awsome dani, a hell of a lot better than I could do WE NEED COLOUR
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Post by Xero Necross on Nov 3, 2007 11:07:26 GMT
nice stuff life i like its great and magnificent. and other good sounding words
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Post by Tha Chibilover on Nov 3, 2007 12:03:33 GMT
nice! better then il eva do
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Post by danosix on Nov 3, 2007 14:51:49 GMT
Ta for the comments, Fitzy especially. I may improve on them but I rarely do. I often just look for the errors in previous drawings and improve from there but if I do then I will update them asap.
I would add colour but I want to bring my drawing skill to a greater level. There is still so much I struggle with which can really give my drawings some life. Just need to sort that out then I can worry about colour.
Thanks again. ^^
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Post by ElvenChibi on Nov 5, 2007 9:09:43 GMT
I envy you dude... I've lost track of my own drawing skills lately, so I'm back to the beginning once again... but these are really awesome!
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Post by danosix on Nov 5, 2007 14:20:24 GMT
Aww, thank you. =3
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