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Post by Cap'n Brass (the braedinator) on Aug 7, 2008 14:28:09 GMT
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Post by Fitzy on Aug 11, 2008 9:16:11 GMT
nice work braedonator, smooth neat anatomy, great propotioning, im guessing you wree drawing from a photo, but even still this is really good in those aspects..
you do need to add more contrast to the shading of the skin tho.. i suggest using a wider range of pencils, try to bring out the facial features more, and use shading to define the shape of the body rather than the outline..
if the shading was apropriately dark enough the body would stand out enough from the pure white back ground to not require an outline, also parts where the body would over lap would also contrast to a line
next time or even if you want to take another try at this one, try to see if you can shade it as acurately as the photo, and i bet you it will work (as the photo obveously doesnt have outlines to define the form)
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Post by Danosix on Aug 13, 2008 10:17:18 GMT
It looks very good and even for a sketch of a photo it is still great. If I were to make a comment I can see her neck. =x I would think from that angle even with her head bowed you'd see the neck connect with the shoulders. At first I thought it was the hair covering it but on her left I can see a gap.
Besides that though very good indeed.
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